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Careless Thought by ~raddie:iconraddie:



Collapsing,
Collapsing to the ground.
Breaking,
Breaking me to pieces.
Darkness,
Darkness surrounding me.
Pulling,
Pulling me deeper...
                                Deeper...

Hollow,
Hollow regards, worthless.
No truth,
No truth in those words.
Why care?
Nothing is wrong...
Nothing.

Words,
Words can do more than that.
Spoken in tone,
In rhythm,
But not a sacred tune.
Words,
Pointless, heartless.
Careless words...

Beating,
Beating of my dejected heart.
Hollow inside,
Echos,
Bouncing off the chambers.
Darkened by growing shadows.
Hollow breathing,
Beating...

Questions,
The questions...
Control gone,
Repetition...
Repeating like an old record in my head.
Haunting me, taunting me.
Questions...

Rejected.
Love, natural but not in truth.
Who knows anymore?
Not me, nor myself.
"Help",
I cry, but no one hears.
Help me...
Rejected.
©2006-2008 ~raddie
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I was really, really depressed today in English.
We were only watching a movie in there again, so I had free time.
So I wrote this.

Its really creepy compared to some of my poetry, but I like it.
It has a nice rhythm.. *nod*

Soyeah.
I'm alright now, but this is what happens when I get depressed.. o_o;

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~luperescuerii:iconluperescuerii: May 23, 2006, 4:53:49 PM
o_o... Wow. This is such a powerful poem <33333

It's beautifully done, you are an awesome poet.

:heart:

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~raddie:iconraddie: May 23, 2006, 5:08:36 PM
Thanks for the random hug <3

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~raddie:iconraddie: May 23, 2006, 5:09:04 PM
Thanks :3
That means alot to me.

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~lil-miss-mousey:iconlil-miss-mousey: May 23, 2006, 5:14:36 PM
yay random hugs are awsome!
~shadoed:iconshadoed: May 23, 2006, 5:29:59 PM
Astounding, as always. Jammed packed with emotions, and I can relate. Beautiful <3
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winning with help."
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~raddie:iconraddie: May 23, 2006, 6:05:23 PM
Thanks, love! :heart: <3

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~mikisthehb:iconmikisthehb: May 25, 2006, 1:49:56 PM
im sorry u felt that way in english u didnt tell me when we talked on that day i love u bunches and im sorry we have had to put up alot with this relation ship but im glad that things arnt bad any more

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~SSEJBAT:iconSSEJBAT: Jun 5, 2006, 12:13:55 PM
i like the style of this, sometimes its hard to break for the old 4 line stanza, good going!

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i beg you,
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gone beserk your dinner is on the ceiling!
just because I'm not beautiful...it doesn't mean i'm dead
:hug:s are good